Pre lim peer feedback

Peer feedback

Below is my complete final Pre-Lim piece, please fill out the questions below.

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Name: Jessica Stevenson

Strengths: The structure is very unique and fits nicely around the model. The model also looks very 'student-like' as if she would go to a college and be an ideal student - this shows the model has been selected well and there has clearly been a thought process behind it. Also the use of the words 'BREAKING NEWS' is eye catching and works well to dramatise what is happening and make people more likely to pick up the magazine.

Improvements: Maybe saturate the model a bit more? add a date? Apart from that there is nothing wrong with it.

Any further comments: I love the use of the logo in the corner - its an added thing that wasn't needed but makes it much more believable.

Evaluation of comments: I agree with what Jess has said - i also see what she is saying about having a date. If i were to do this again i would definily add that in. his is something i can learn from for my actual music magazine.