Contents page - Review 1

Originally i had planned to spread the contents page over a double page spread. I had severalpictures in a collage on the first page with 'contents' written in the same font used previously. I then had the text onthe right hand side page saying what was on each page and references to the images on the left. However, after some peer feedback, i have been told to instead condence the two pages onto one, with the images still in a collage style and the text almost fixed around the text. i believe this is more effective as it means i can make the page look less simplistic but still minimalist, on the other hand, i want to make sure i do not over crowd the page as that is not what my magazine is about, that would be more like a rock magazine.